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Alice in Dark Wonderland

Mon Sep 28, 2009, 7:22 AM
Esta es la historia en la que estoy trabajando, la pondre en Español y en Ingles, disfrutadla, empiezo con la breve introduccion


“Erase una vez que se era, un reino fantástico, los conejos hablaban y vestían trajeados, el suelo era el tejado y el tejado era el suelo, todo era alegría y quien mandaba en este lugar era una reina, la reina de corazones… su ejército eran naipes.
Alicia, nuestra protagonista, calló desde la madriguera de un conejo blanco a una casa fantástica, y de allí a un reino lleno de color y alegría…”

Cerré el libro de golpe, menuda tontería, las cosas no eran así, no según mi criterio, Alicia era mi obsesión, ese cuento era mi vida y quería descubrir la verdad….
Me levanté de mi cama y miré a la ventana, siempre miraba sobre las doce de la noche con la esperando a que un porsche negro apareciera delante de mi casa y que mis padres por fin llegaran. Pero no era así…. A cambio de eso tenía que estar pendiente de las medicinas de mi abuela… era una maldita esclavitud…
-¡Alice, niña!- Gritaba mi abuela desde mi habitación, llamándome…. Yo era solo la pobre Alice Hackins, una adolescente de 15 años cuales padres viajaban por el mundo y me dejaban a cargo de mi pobre abuela de 80 años… “Alguien tiene que cuidar a la abuela” Decía mi padre… lo que pasa que yo era un estorbo… por eso me vicié a los cuentos de terror y a ese maldito cuento que pintaba Wonderland como el lugar más maravilloso…. Pero sé que hay más…. Sabía que había más…
Sumida en mis pensamientos otro grito me volvió a dejar sorda
-¡¡¡Alice, mis medicinas de media noche!!!- Mi abuela era una pesada, suspiré y le traje su jarabe….
Me eché a dormir y pensé… mañana vuelta a empezar…
Ja… nada más alejado de la realidad….claro que en ese momento no sabía el que se avecinaba….


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This is history in that I am working, pondre in Spanish and in English, disfrutadla, I begin with the brief introduction


“It had once, a fantastic kingdom, the rabbits they spoke and they dressed in suits, the ground was the tile roof and the tile roof was the ground, everything was joy and who commanded in this place was a queen, the queen of hearts… their army was naipes.
Alcw, our protagonist, was silent from the warren of a white rabbit to a fantastic house, and of there to a full kingdom of color and joy…”

I closed the blow book, slight triviality, the things were not thus, not according to my criterion, Alicia was my obsession, that story was my life and wanted to discover the truth….
I rose of my bed and I watched the window, it always watched on the twelve at night with hoping to that black porsche appeared in front of my house and that my parents finally arrived. But it was not thus…. In exchange for that it had to be pending of medicines of my grandmother… was a damn slavery…
-Alice, girl! - My grandmother Shouted from my room, calling to me…. I was only the poor Alice Hackins, an adolescent of 15 years as parents traveled by the world and they left me in charge of my poor grandmother of 80 years… “Somebody must take care of the grandmother” Said my father… what happens that I was I hinder… for that reason I vecame vitiated to stories of terror and that damn story that Wonderland like the most wonderful place painted…. But I know that there is more…. It knew that there was more…
Sunk in my thoughts another shout it returned to me to leave deaf
-Alice, my medicines of average night! - My grandmother was one annoying one, I sighed and I brought its syrup to him….
I lay down to sleep and I thought tomorrow… returned to begin…
Je… nothing else moved away of the reality….clear that then the one did not know that was approached….




If there is something it sounds to you rare to which reads the text in English, please, sorry, but I am translating this with a very fail translator

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:iconkrystalwitch:
ERES UNA MALDITA BITCH !!! TIENES DEVIANT ART Y NO ME DICES NADA T____T -hugs- (tu tampoco te escapas onii-chan por no decirmelo ¬¬;)

Bueno, quedas watcheada de por vida prima mia >: D
:iconmina-alice:
;_; sorry krys, but i'm very sillyXDDD
:iconkrystalwitch:
.........LOOOOOOOL!!!!!! *la abraza*
:iconkirara22:
thanks for the fav yami chan!^^

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If you don't find your way left to guide you on mine ... u.u That nice! >w< xDD
Sorry if I've got a ortography mistake,I'm SPANISH!!!
PLEASE SPEAK SPANISH T(POR FAVOR HABLEN ESPAÑOL!!)
:iconnixneitor:
YAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII :heart:

soy yo!!!! NIX!!!! OwO

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:iconkirara22:
gracias por el fav^^

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If you don't find your way left to guide you on mine ... u.u That nice! >w< xDD
Sorry if I've got a ortography mistake,I'm SPANISH!!!
PLEASE SPEAK SPANISH T(POR FAVOR HABLEN ESPAÑOL!!)
:iconkirara22:
Gracias por el watch Yami chan^^

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If you don't find your way left to guide you on mine ... u.u That nice! >w< xDD
Sorry if I've got a ortography mistake,I'm SPANISH!!!
PLEASE SPEAK SPANISH T(POR FAVOR HABLEN ESPAÑOL!!)

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